Thesis: Masculinity is the bad boy/the rocker.
Supporting Idea: Riding a motorcycle (always on the go, rebellious )
Supporting Idea: Model looks Strong ( 6pack, Shirt ripped off, looks dangerous has no helmet on, facial expression concentration while women has pout, a sexual look. )
Supporting Idea: Loner type (leaning away from the women, face turned away, looks as if always on the run)
Supporting Idea: Beautiful women on his back ( He has a beautiful girl on him and he acts like as if he doesn't care, hes a womanizer)
Supporting Idea: Background & colors ( All the colors from the background to the clothes hes/she is wearing are black to grey or a dark navy. hes not wearing bright colors its not welcoming)
conculsion: closing statement about why all these supporting ideas make him & men like him masculine.
i like your comments. you can say he is adventurious in his demeanor, and a womenizer at heart. just giving you some feed-back
ReplyDeleteYour thesis and supporting points work well together. But think about the order in which you arrage your supporting points; maybe begin with the male's appearance, then move on the what he is doing(riding a motorcycle)and what he is wearing as his clothes, at least in the ad, seem to be suited for riding a bike; laslty, you can move on to the discussion of the woman, which like his clothes, is an accessory? What do you think? You need to develop this outline. Please follow the format provided on the assignment.
ReplyDeleteYou could also maybe put the spin on it that its not that he doesnt care that beautiful woman is on his back but that he is confident about where she is. He doesnt pay her attention or even acknowledge her presence cause in essence of the scene being portrayed she is where she should be and that adds to his confidence.
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